Wikipedia:Peer review/Rebecca Clarke/archive1
This isn't a novel-length article, but I think it's a good size relative to her importance. I'd like general suggestions for improvement and an idea of what the general reader would want to know that isn't covered. Mindspillage (spill yours?) 01:42, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- It really needs a photo, preferably more than one. Since http://www.rebeccaclarke.org/ is licenced under Creative Commons, they'd probably be happy to provide us with photos if we asked them.-gadfium 05:18, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- Duly noted; I'll make a request. Mindspillage (spill yours?) 17:31, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- You could probably peruse the text and find a few more words to link, such as sonata. Also is there anything about the Rebecca Clarke Society that would be worth adding to this page in a separate section? But overall it looks good. Thanks. — RJH 16:01, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- Ah, good idea; I hadn't thought of giving the Society a section but without it I'd've had a hard time finding material for the article! Mindspillage (spill yours?) 17:31, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- The Oxford Dictionary of National Biography has a decent entry for her, you might find it useful to flesh out the life setion a little bit more, if you don't have access leave a msg on my talk page. --nixie 11:35, 28 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- Thank you for the tip; I don't have electronic access but I'm across the street from a library, so I've no excuse. :-) Mindspillage (spill yours?) 18:20, 1 May 2005 (UTC)
I've also since corresponded with Liane Curtis of the Rebecca Clarke Society (thank you, RJH; she appreciated the coverage), who has suggested several helpful updates and corrections and asserted that the images now included are free to use. I am pulling this PR request and listing the article on FAC; thank you for your comments! Mindspillage (spill yours?) 18:20, 1 May 2005 (UTC)